archived-videos Deleted (Action Film)

[FONZOfilms]

Check out this action sequence I made a few weeks ago, I have been trying to become better at editing action scenes and it was also the first time I color corrected any of my work.

Enjoy!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b-ghOv3ZIuY



If you like what you saw, check out the rest of my channel.

 

[DirtyPicturesTV]

Hey, that was pretty good! I've seen much worse action scenes in "professional" films.

Two notes:

The bass drums in the beginning soundtrack are so loud that its audio steps on all of the other audio tracks. It sounds like it's clipping in parts, and more to the point, it sounds like it needs bass compression so it doesn't have such a wide audio footprint. At very minimum, turn it down a bit.

Secondly, the fight scene in the house at the end is the weak part. Your editing pace slows way down, and you linger on your shots far too long. The running sequence at the beginning was much tighter and better.