archived-videos Crosses Ep1 "Sorry Brother" (Action series)

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It's a bit dark. Light your scenes better next time. At this point, you may want to brighten it up with some correction and stylize with some grading. There are focus issues as well. Practice focusing. Find a composer to score the project as well, the music is recognizable. The audio is hard to understand sometimes too. Either it's the actors or the audio recording, but there were a few lines I did not understand. The Pittsburg sweater was distracting. There are some jump cuts as well, which are distracting. Get a Foley artist too, that stabbing sound effect was horrible. There was some "jelly" footage too, which was distracting. The blood looked far too digital as well. Too bright and clean looking. There are some white walls as well. The settings aren't appealing to look at. The blood splatter with the title looked fake as well. You need to pick up the pacing too. This got a bit boring, the story wasn't the most interesting either. Some of the color correction/grading in some shots looked off. Some shots need some serious white balancing as well. It wasn't gripping. I wasn't hooked. I wasn't interested. I skimmed through it because the technical flaws and uninteresting story didn't keep my interested enough to finish.

Although there were some good performances, a couple of good shots, and the fight scenes looked nice.

Sorry if that's too harsh :(
 
Not harsh at all, im looking for honest opinions. Kinda let down story couldnt keep you interested cause we tried to keep the action flowing. However saying that it lets me know what I need to work on. I can agree with you on alot of it, focus issues as well as music.
 
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