archived-videos creepy scarlett test

[LastSunsetFilms]

I'm doing a little short to introduce a character creepy scarlett, just trying to find a look for the short, don't have after effects or anything and i'm trying to get the best out of my hg10 in terms of focus and such.

any thoughts,tips, critique welcome. there is a few shots i like and it is the kind of direction i want to go in for the look but not quite there yet.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3lmVXq04-U8

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3lmVXq04-U8

 

[Dreadylocks]

I'm liking the look. As for improvements the first thing I noticed is that your first panning down shot is a little uneven and very fast. Also, did you have your camera on automatic exposure? That 'catch-up' moment when it adjusts was pretty distracting.

What's the film about?

 

[LastSunsetFilms]

yeah i will probably avoid pans since i don't have a fluid head tripod. i'm sure i had the aperture set, it does that quick adjustment for some reason.

it will be a narrated short to introduce Creepy Scarlett, a dead girl who lives in the cemetery. Have an 8yr old to play young (alive) scarlett and and older girl to play dead scarlett. just something to test out the idea. maybe more stories or animated shorts are some ideas if it works out.