screenplay Could you take a look at this?

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I plan for this to be a short story type of screenplay. This isn't the entire thing, nor is it much. I hope this is enough to gather some opinion on, I just want another pair of eyes on it. Thank you in advance, I appreciate the help. Please let me know if there is anything good about it a the moment and what is bad of may need work. Again this is not a lot at the moment and there is more to the story I plan to write in.