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archived-videos Comedy project

Short film 2008: Labor
School Folio Project

(NOTE: Coarse language)
Basically this is a comedy I made for my Year 12 media project this year. I chose to represent a single-camera sitcom (had to do this whole folio to accompany the film too, with script, storyboard, analysis etc.).
The film was made under strict time conditions and as a result I couldn't return to refilm certain shots. I have edited windnoise out best I could. Had to use a basic handheld camera for the project.

Feedback would be greatly appreciated!

http://au.youtube.com/watch?v=2KyOn2KuUiY
 
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Seems like you know that the audio is a problem, so I won't belabor that point.

You had some funny lines in there -- gonna have to remember "Ever since I got you pregnant, you've been grumpy." But some of the jokes fell flat (the flash backs of how she says I'm pregnant could have been punched up some).

Over all I liked it.
 
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