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Christmas Movie!

Hey.

Looks like you guys had a blast!

I'm probably not the best person to give feedback on editing cuz I'm a newbie but in my opinion as a viewer I think the transition in between songs could have been a little smoother. It seemed a bit choppy to me. I really enjoyed the different shots you used. It kept me interested I get bored really easily when a shot is too long, but you edited them down nicely. I watched the whole thing (even though it wasn't very long) without wanting to shut it off.

Maybe just make the song transition cleaner?
 
Thanks!

Yes, the fades on the songs was done wrong,i know.First I just want to have one song, and now I see that I should dont that.
 
Some of the cuts felt a bit random and out of place, but overall it was enjoyable.

I would agree on the music transition.

Overall, it's vaguely reminiscent of a Warren Miller film, and all that was missing were some shots from underneath looking skyward with the skiers jumping / flipping over the camera.. ;)
 
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