Nice. Honestly, this is considerably better than most of the work I've seen from intro-level college students, so the fact that you're doing this well in high school puts you far ahead of the curve. Nice camera work. Looks to me like you have a homemade steadicam? You should also make a homemade track and dolly. They're cheap, easy, and effective. I can send you a basic design if you're interested. You had a nice zoom-shot, when the dude is laying back on the couch, talking on the phone. Imagine how much more awesome that shot would have been on a dolly. Keep up the good work. I wish I would've started as early as you.