https://docs.google.com/file/d/0BwMMk_YZfry2LU1CTmZtOXl4MUE/edit?usp=sharing
Hey guys, I've been writing this screenplay with the intention of submitting it to the Slamdance Horror Contest at the end of June. It comes from a very personal place, and more so than any other screenplay I've written, I'm very excited about it. I'm sharing the first half (Plus the conclusion) in hopes that I can get some feedback. Any comments, suggestions, criticisms, etc. would be greatly appreciated. Hope you guys enjoy!
Synopsis: Mary-Anne Collins spent years living under the oppressive reign of her abusive husband. After his passing in a car accident, Mary-Anne felt she had a new life ahead of her. However, something sinister has survived, with the intention of continuing what was left over in life.
Side note: When Mary-Anne states "Come and get me, you bastard." that is when it jumps to the conclusion. I wrote it before the rest, so that's why there's a lapse in the narrative.
Hey guys, I've been writing this screenplay with the intention of submitting it to the Slamdance Horror Contest at the end of June. It comes from a very personal place, and more so than any other screenplay I've written, I'm very excited about it. I'm sharing the first half (Plus the conclusion) in hopes that I can get some feedback. Any comments, suggestions, criticisms, etc. would be greatly appreciated. Hope you guys enjoy!
Synopsis: Mary-Anne Collins spent years living under the oppressive reign of her abusive husband. After his passing in a car accident, Mary-Anne felt she had a new life ahead of her. However, something sinister has survived, with the intention of continuing what was left over in life.
Side note: When Mary-Anne states "Come and get me, you bastard." that is when it jumps to the conclusion. I wrote it before the rest, so that's why there's a lapse in the narrative.