I think I may regret posting this here, LOL! But why not; getting critiques can be helpful. 
This was my response to a project in my English class in high school. We have been studying Dante's inferno, and the task was to create a 10th level of hell, complete with a specified sin, a punishment, and a guide:
My sin is Drunk Driving..
My guide is someone who has a severe drinking problem and was involved in a crash,
My punishment is to take a road test after experiencing a dose of what it is like to be stuck in a wheel chair. If you fail the test, you return to the wheel chair. The first dose is used as a tool for the person to really try and pass the road test. I guess the ultimate guilt would be knowing you had a shot at passing it and getting out of Hell. lol
Now, before I post the links... I just want to explain. I tried to incorporate some local comedy into it. The guide is loosely based on my English teacher who is a crazy neurotic woman (not necessarily a drunk LOL) This is by NO means, professional, although I am proud that it sort of blew everyone else's projects out of the water haha! It is VERY VERY corny... which was a goal to begin with (especially towards the end, you'll see) The ending part was very rushed with filming. It was starting to snow, and we literally had 5 minutes to shoot. So, I tried to salvage what I could; the concept is the character passes the test, and is able to return to life, but the thought of her experience is always on her mind.
Part One: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-JXOT5eYguQ
Part Two: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UCQhijzmaMY
I hope you like it! And please, rip it apart! Like I said, it's no where near professional. I'd love to hear some advice, or any questions you may have.
This was my response to a project in my English class in high school. We have been studying Dante's inferno, and the task was to create a 10th level of hell, complete with a specified sin, a punishment, and a guide:
My sin is Drunk Driving..
My guide is someone who has a severe drinking problem and was involved in a crash,
My punishment is to take a road test after experiencing a dose of what it is like to be stuck in a wheel chair. If you fail the test, you return to the wheel chair. The first dose is used as a tool for the person to really try and pass the road test. I guess the ultimate guilt would be knowing you had a shot at passing it and getting out of Hell. lol
Now, before I post the links... I just want to explain. I tried to incorporate some local comedy into it. The guide is loosely based on my English teacher who is a crazy neurotic woman (not necessarily a drunk LOL) This is by NO means, professional, although I am proud that it sort of blew everyone else's projects out of the water haha! It is VERY VERY corny... which was a goal to begin with (especially towards the end, you'll see) The ending part was very rushed with filming. It was starting to snow, and we literally had 5 minutes to shoot. So, I tried to salvage what I could; the concept is the character passes the test, and is able to return to life, but the thought of her experience is always on her mind.
Part One: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-JXOT5eYguQ
Part Two: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UCQhijzmaMY
I hope you like it! And please, rip it apart! Like I said, it's no where near professional. I'd love to hear some advice, or any questions you may have.
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Thanks for the reply! I appreciate it! Any additional tips/advice/suggestions/etc you have I would love to hear!!