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  1. davidchecker

    I'm reading this script, and ...

    "We see" seems to be used even in Hollywoo shooting scripts, when what we see is especially crucial to the story, or a big suprise...any other time is freakin' redundant. Now is this thread dun or wot?
  2. davidchecker

    I'm reading this script, and ...

    We see yet another Indietalk thread wind down to its collegial conclusion. C.U. - On a weary moderator lighting a hand-rolled cigarette, savoring that first breath of nicotine. PULLBACK - He turns away and gamboles lazily down a hallway of mute shadows, as we hear his FOOTFALLS play taps to...
  3. davidchecker

    Common screenwriting mistakes… Part 1

    Haven't sent to any names yet, just people who know people who know people - ARE THE HAPPIEST PEOPLE IN THE WORLD....(ahem, well, back to work....)
  4. davidchecker

    Common screenwriting mistakes… Part 1

    Thanks for the Secondary Slug! One piece of the script structure puzzle I've been struggling with. I think I'll still go on using DAY or NIGHT on every slug though, stories run over any length of days and nights, and I don't want any confusion, no matter how much credit is due the almighty...
  5. davidchecker

    2 months to go!Hello USA!

    You might look at making it known that you have footage, to other filmmakers, to news services, prodcos, etc... in order to take the weight off your shoulders in regards to having a finished, polished piece- you could get your start by having your footage used on another project, like a...
  6. davidchecker

    Something from my time

    I think it's Fantasy if it could never happen, Alternate Reality is if it could've happened. Then there's a genre that I think originated with Jay Sherman from the animated "The Critic" tv show. A combination of Fantasy and Crap, called "Fanta-Crap"
  7. davidchecker

    Something from my time

    I think that certain kinds of stories that "rewrite" history are called "alternative reality" stories, in that you're not creating something that requires extraordinary events to occur (like in science fiction or fantasy), you're just pursuing a "what if" scenario in the context of known, shared...
  8. davidchecker

    Oscars

    I agreed that the racism approached farcical levels, I think they just tried to do too much in one movie.Too much serendipity, generally. By the end, I just didn't care because I knew I was being manipulated. Actually, making it a farce would've made it more watchable, but then no one would've...
  9. davidchecker

    Oscars

    "Crash" was critically non-controversial. Everyone did a good job. Even the subject matter was a bit of a yawn for me- racisim, prejudice, social inequality, police corruption, things that we know about and discuss constantly and openly. And do very little about. "Brokeback" was controversial...
  10. davidchecker

    Drag your Protagonist through the mud...

    Dennis Weaver in DUEL Robert Redford in THE DAY OF THE CONDOR Jim Carrey in THE MASK (well, maybe a bit of a stretch)
  11. davidchecker

    Drag your Protagonist through the mud...

    On my fifth feature-length script, I'm finally getting clued into the basics. What I find myself doing too often is writing passive-voice protaganists who find themselves in scenes that the audience might react to, but certainly won't engage them. This is partly because I've tended to write my...
  12. davidchecker

    Promises Lost?

    Kevin Bacon - do the Bluto! (Animal House didn't really launch any careers, although I think it was National Lampoon's peak - Sorry, Griswolds)
  13. davidchecker

    "Dark Star" 1974 classic college cult film.

    I always thought the "elevator" was just a box being pushed down a hallway. Saw it once, a long time ago. How about "A boy and his dog"? That's one for sure freaky movie. "Take'em to the farm" - eww
  14. davidchecker

    Promises Lost?

    I'd say he's a lock for "Puck" in Midsummer Night's Dream. Might have to get his tights at "Men's Big and Tall", though. RRAAAAAAAAAAFGGGGGGGG!
  15. davidchecker

    Promises Lost?

    Chewie above the line That language barrier is a bitch to deal with. Also the coughing up fur balls in the middle of a take didn't do him much good.
  16. davidchecker

    Oscars

    I thought Brokeback deserved the oscar over Crash, which was a mishmash with too many characters, an overly ambitious script, and asked too much of the audience. It seemed contrived, oddly enough, next to the gay cowboys in love story, which in the end seemed to have nothing to do with gay...
  17. davidchecker

    watch The Perfect Woman!!!

    Enthusiam will get you as far as you want to go!
  18. davidchecker

    watch The Perfect Woman!!!

    Eddie, you seem sincere, but I couldn't make it all the way through TPW (gee, that TLA is kind of addictive). I must say I enjoyed most of the locations, and shot-framing, even some of the casting, and the general quirkiness of the piece. But the acting wasn't happening, and the editing either...
  19. davidchecker

    No Place - The Movie - website

    my eight or nine cents: If this is to get the film picked up for distribution, that needs to be way more obvious. I had to click on "The Movie", and then click on "Movie Facts", before getting to the nitty gritty. Generally there are an assortment of oddities regarding the site presentation...
  20. davidchecker

    Warning about Media Partners/Reelbrokers

    What are the naive, the vulnerable, and the weak doing in filmmaking? Shouldn't they be in politics?
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