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    misc Does anyone know of any 1960s/1970s gore/shlock film scripts online?

    For example, Hershel Gordon Lewis's movies. I'd prefer scripts over transcripts, but even transcripts would work as I'm mostly interested in the "vibe". I know you can buy the script to Blood Feast as a book, but I'd prefer to not spend any money on this side quest.
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    logline Logline for a steampunk thriller

    An assassin embroiled in a plot against Queen Victoria is psychically attacked by a mysterious cult, flooding her mind with memories from a madman and inflaming her to pursue the cult’s destruction. Thanks in advance for feedback.
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    logline The Sunset of the Last Logline

    Not really, but loglines should have titles. Right? Anyway... An inexperienced businessman is forced to choose between allowing his only investor to torture the startup's artificial intelligence product or hold to his ethics and risk losing the company.
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    logline Logline feedback for a drama, please and thank you

    After a road accident, a young malcontent finds himself legally bound to the whims of a narcissistic billionaire who aims to break him as a person. I am intentionally working logline to script and outside of my preferred genre. You know, as a learning experience. I'm trying to not flesh it out...
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    logline Logline Critique, please and thank you

    For a steaming sci fi series. I've crunched it about as far as I can by myself and wanting other eyes. Cheers. Under the specter of interplanetary war, a wealthy inventor leads a team of top scientists and intrepid adventurers against greedy corporations and corrupt governments to perfect the...
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    dialogue Repeating Parentheticals?

    I'm indicating where a characters voice is coming from and I want to know, do I need to keep repeating on every bit of dialog? Is it acceptable to provide this parenthetical on the first bit of dialog and then not mention again unless the situation changes? Here an example: CHARACTER A (via...
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    "Hello. Keep calm, answer the questions, and everyone will get out of here alive."

    Seeking a decent place to discuss screenwriting. I hope this is it. Like so many others, I bash on scripts. As of joining this forum I've written three movies and several episodes of a series. Sold none of it, but haven't tried to. Looking to get better before I start getting aggressive. How...
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