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critique A Drop of Honey - A 6 page short script I'd like some critique on
Although it's much more crisp than what I wrote, I really have to mention that Govindan and Kannan are not brothers. Thanks for the feedback anyways.- gspbatman
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critique A Drop of Honey - A 6 page short script I'd like some critique on
This is based on the Mahabharata short tale of a guy wanting pleasure even in the times of utmost urgency. The story and screenplay are entirely my own, but the base idea is lifted from a 5000 year old tale. It's 6 pages long and contains some language. Hope you enjoy.- gspbatman
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Hey everyone! It's a jungle out there, I had to beat an old lady with a stick to log in.
I am Prathyush Ram G.S., I'm just 16 years old and am a student. I just love the craft of screenwriting so much ever since watching Inception, the movie that inspired me. I hope to give and get feedback and improve myself here. Sci-Fi and Romance are my favorite genres.