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    critique The Time Traveler - 8-page sci-fi screenplay for feedback

    Hi there :) I bring you a short sci-fi script for getting feedback, and tell me what you think about it... Logline: In New York in 1997, a Colledge Student Journalist name Bill interviews a Person Named Josef who Claim To be a Time Traveler from the Future - the interview gives a short glimpse...
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    critique White Night - a short Screenplay for Feedback

    Hello... here is a short screenplay for feedback of any kind... Logline: Steve, Jane, and Michael were close Friends during the 90s as teens, now 25 years later, Micheal vanished long ago, and Steve and Jane are left stuck with the Memories, the Loneliness, and the loveless life - the...
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    website a Forum for semi-amateur Hebrew Screenplays

    hello, I would like to share and give a link to a small forum dedicated to Hebrew semi-amateur or complete amateur screenplays - this is not a site/forum for professional screenplays it's just a forum for sharing scripts and getting feedback in English/Hebrew on scripts in order to improve -...
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    critique Dan's Shadow - a screenplay for review and feedback

    Title: Dan's Shadow Logline: Dan is a Man hunted by his shadow Diana tries to help him with "shadow work" but the more she tries the worse it gets till the bitter end. Genre: Drama-Horror Format: Short Film Pages: 7 Feedback: yes every kind of feedback is welcomed. grammar - plot - dialogues -...
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    critique Middle Eastern Punk - a script to review and give feedback on

    title: Middle Eastern Punk logline: Tel Aviv small punk scene in the early 80's as seen from the eyes of Yoni a young man who escaped from military service during the first israel-lebanon war. genre: Drama / coming of age / LGBT+ format: Short Film pages: 29 what kind of feedback I'm interested...
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    hello nice to meet you...

    Hello Everyone. My Name is Ronen Blumberg, I'm 44 years old from Israel. I have been into Creative Writing for the last 14 years (mostly poetry and short stories and screenplays in Hebrew). although I am not a fan of Pop Culture I still do like to tell stories and so I'm trying to learn the...
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