would you take a look at my outline?
It's super rough and i havent punctuated it or anything yet.
I'd love some feedback from someone who has directed and written shorts previous!
Maybe she has a favourite author? Actor/actress
She lives by the quote. You know?
Something like ‘life on the road’ I looked up at the dark sky and prayed to God for a better break in life and a better chance to do something for the little people I loved.
Maybe she leaves that in her note and...