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    critique 5 page short drama

    My mistake about Ryan's phone call. But in regards to being understandable, it very much is. I don't see any glaring plot holes either. When it comes to shielding the child, I'm assuming the father is more nonchalant about it because he gave up or is tired of the position they're in? I tried...
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    critique 5 page short drama

    Hey Jkds. I personally liked the way you laid out the story and the twist in the end. It reminds me a bit of the opening scene from "Up", or at least that's how I pictured it. The main questions I have are: Are the parents aware of what is happening around them? If so, why not try and shield the...
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    Hello Everyone!

    I am an amateur screenwriter with many ideas and little experience. I am hoping to learn from you all and help in whatever ways I can. Thank you!
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