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    critique Feedback for screenplay outline wanted.

    So I thank you for your replies and suggestions, I tried to explain a little bit more, I got the impression, that some stuff wasn't as clear as I thought it to be (maybe I'm wrong about that). Laylah is seventeen, Kyle twenty. I understand how this could grab the readers (or viewers)...
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    critique Feedback for screenplay outline wanted.

    So, I've came up with this idea for a screenplay because of a line in a song from X called Los Angeles, where at one point, the singers sings "she had to leave". As I took those words out of context, I asked myself "Why did she have to leave?". Based on that thought I had an idea about a story...
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    Hello

    I'm Lars, 21 and I found this website because I searched for a screenwriting forum and it came up in the suggestions.
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