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    Logline Feedback

    ALright, thanks guys. I'll think about it.
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    Logline Feedback

    Thanks for your thoughts. I'll think about how to rewrite it. I feel like including the connection to something in the past (local tragedy) gives it more depth so I'd love to keep it in somehow.
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    Logline Feedback

    So would you suggest leaving out the middle part about the local tragedy?
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    Logline Feedback

    Would this logline spark your interest? Investigating a gruesome murder in the idyllic Rocky Mountains, mysteriously connected to a local tragedy 30 years ago, makes an aging Detective question his concept of justice. Personally, I would love to write more, but I guess keeping it short is the...
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    How "colourful" should the writing be?

    Thanks for all your answers. Personally, I think it's aƶright to drift a bit away form writing only what you can really see, as long as potential readers understand and can picture what you mean.
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    How "colourful" should the writing be?

    For example, I don't want actors to turn it down because it's too far off from what they expect from reading a script. But again, I don't plan from writing wild stuff that leaves people wondering what the hell they're reading.
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    How "colourful" should the writing be?

    I will shoot the script myself, but it also has to go out to a second director, actors and investors. So I treat it like a script for sale. In the example video, all scripts weren't shot by their writers, als they are very far from the rule in parts.
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    How "colourful" should the writing be?

    Thanks for your thoughts. I'll try to find a good balance while writing. I'm in a very early stage, 20 pages so far. I'm sure there will be more questions popping up.
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    How "colourful" should the writing be?

    Hi everyone, I'm writing a script for s series pilot at the moment, and I'm wondering how "colourful" I should really write in the script. I know that the general rule is to "write only what you see on screen", but I tend to think that it should be "write what the reader can imagine". In a lot...
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    Hi guys

    I'm a Video Editor for more than 10 years now and at the moment I'm writing my first script for a series pilot. Of course, a lot of questions are popping up during the process, and that's what brought me here to this forum. I appreciate every help I can get.
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