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I really appreciate the help. I really didnt expect anyone to make it that far. Actually excited to fix the issues. Thank you.

I've defintely been thinking about that Voicemail. Not only ar eyou right about the paing but I've seen afew things since i wrote this that mleads me to believe a Dr would never give that kind of information over a voicemail with confirming with the patient (a release of information document)...

Im fairly positive no one will ever pick up one of my scripts and want to buy it. I always felt I'd end up filming stuff myself so I started using the technique. But I dont do it in my actual screenplay so i don't confuse anyone reading it.

This is only the second screenplay I've attempted to write. The first one is even longer. Just looking for osme advice on how my format looks, how the characters sound and if it comes out clearly. Actually, any and all advice. I've been trying to write it in a way icould film it myself but I...

the most improtant thing for my characters is that they all sound differently. SO I Do backstories on characters past, eduation and behavior so they sound like themselves and not like me or every other character in the story. IN relaity people from a specific region sound similar but not exactly...

curious of this myself. I've been very judgmental of my intercut/flashback stuff. I don't want it to coe off confusing or too quick. Of course when I read it they make sense but thats not everyone and I'm aware of that.

i number my scenes too for the point of having every scene thats at a location outlined. (Location A involves scene 1. 3 & 6, Location B has scenes 2, 4 & 5 as an example) I will say, the language seems a little formal. It feels tight. That's just me. People in private arent overly formal. I...

This is just me, but I always like a little exposition. I'd like to know more about about the characters, the type of person they are, and I'd like to display what exactly the gun is capable of doing, hinting at whats going to happen in the future. Like, how the male character came to order or...

have you done backstory writing for characters? Who they are, their parents, childhood, behavior, level of education, linguistic tendencies, likes/dislikes?? I find when i frame the entirety of a person putting them into any situation becomes easier? Know your character the way the NSA knows a...

How married are you to this concept? Is this writing for the sake of writing or would you like to see this in action? In my opinion, just on paper, it seems like a little busy conceptually. I have to ask why these things? Horror, Mythology, Modern times. Is this a fascination of yours or more...

Thank you i most certainly will.

IS there a tactful limit to how long a posted script can be New to the group and I was hoping to solicit for notes on a "finished" screenplay i wrote and I don't want to be tactless in asking someone to read over a 40 page screenplay. I see some people posting a few pages of their work but i...