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Ok, 3 months ago I finished the first draft of a screenplay of "The Forgotten Battle" and posted a thread here asking for feedback. You can probably find the thread by searching. And I got some very honest and healthy feedback. Since then, I have revised multiple things in the screenplay, took...

Better? This a 3rd draft of a "full" screenplay. A lot of it has changed. But if there are any typos you see, let me know, immediately, so I can get rid of them. https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B2gtHMO2K_7PZmdhLUk0aHJOeFE/view?usp=sharing

Just in general for all oscar categories. Page 25 is what you're looking for.: http://www.oscars.org/sites/oscars/files/90aa_rules.pdf

Thanks! :)

Thanks for the feedback. I am almost finished with the entire script being done. Just a few more scenes to write. After that, time for more editing. This is either going to be my masterpiece/official kick in the door or my biggest blunder.

That makes sense. I've always used realism and authenticity in my use of dialogue because I wanted to capture that feel. And if you have to explain that to me, then I've screwed up somewhere. And I also guess, I just like telling/adding stories of/to the characters. Maybe it's a habit of mine. (...

I fixed the direct part just now. To be honest, the reason I had it in there was so that the readers don't get confused on what's happening. The heavy dialogue. Sure. Ok. My writings have been praised for its dialogue, so heavy dialogue doesn't worry me that much. Sure, it's a concern, but not...

I'm fixing that right now.

Intended Camera shot is what it is.

Can you not access the link?

First impressions are everything (I guess). Hello, those who are reading. I need a favor of you all. I need to know how good or bad my screenplay is. I really do think it's good but, I would like to have another's opinion. To give context: It's called "The Forgotten Battle". It's about the...