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    FIRST VLOG!!!!!

    I'm not sure why it's necessary for people to post videos about their mundane lives, but you seem pretty excited... so congratulations, I think. What's this button do... ZAP!
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    Question concerning short film screenplay.

    I'm not a fan of one-room movies - nor do I like super hype multiple location action movies, for that matter. If I were to think about it, however, many sitcoms are 95% of the time, one-room shows & I enjoy sitcoms. Perhaps that's the best way to approach it. Definitely show time go by, either...
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    Is my premise compelling?

    Interesting. I'd probably go with a much darker ending where she reveals the truth in a note that really leaves it up to the viewer to figure out. Or maybe she vindicates herself to the love of her adoring fans while tripping backward on a cable and electrocutes herself in a bunch of lights...
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    Is my premise compelling?

    If you wanted to stay with the murder, she could have a good reason for either having done it, or for not coming forward sooner to clear her name. I'm not against the murder so much, but 12 minutes isn't enough time to develop a story like that.
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    Is my premise compelling?

    I like the premise. But the murder (possible murder) aspect could create an investigation causing drama more powerful than the main storyline. Perhaps a less dramatic past? Maybe she was forced to perform in a sex club or some hidden secret where someone comes across her past and tries to...
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    'BOX' Short Film

    I just got an old film camera & some film which I can develop myself (I do film photography). However, it is very cost prohibitive to do a long movie working only with film, so I want to mix digital & film, also using still photography as you did with the black & white shots. I just realized I...
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