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    First draft of a short screenplay (five pages)

    Thanks for the feedback, I have a lot to learn. I'll throw in here that I'm a high school student, not an excuse for poor writing though.
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    First draft of a short screenplay (five pages)

    I'm looking to get some feedback on the first draft of a screenplay I wrote. It's the first time I've written a screenplay as I'm usual on the technical side of things. I'm not looking for formatting issues; I'm sure there are plenty and I know I shouldn't include camera moves, but because I...
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    slow motion in 1080p?

    I'd say the gh4 is your best bet. While you may get more fps from the gopro, the gh4 footage will be of a much higher quality. 90% of the time I'd say gopro footage is noticeable when mixed with dslr footage etc. This isn't to say I haven't seen high quality shots from a gopro, but it will...
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    Blue is the Warmest Color

    Can you give some other examples? I haven't seen too many foreign films.
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    Blue is the Warmest Color

    A couple days ago I decided to watch Blue is the Warmest Color. Really didn't know much about what to expect, knew it won the Palme d'Or and I had heard about the explicit sex scenes, but not much else. Initially I liked it, I felt it dragged at times but felt very real. After a few days to let...
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    watch Short Horror film - Feedback please!

    You could have left out the writing at the beginning and it wouldn't have changed the story.
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    How does this idea end?

    Hi guys this is my first post here I've had this idea for a short for a little while, it's about a girl who is fed up with her repetitive suburban life and decides to runaway into the country. She reaches her destination, a house owned by her family that she knows will be empty, but soon...
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