Update
Thanks for all the input guys. I updated the file and tried to soften the amount of cuts. I had a heck of a time because of the lack of good takes, but i do feel it's improved. Cheers!
Bear // A short film
https://vimeo.com/stevenweinzierl/bear
I'd love to hear what everyone thinks. Had a blast making it. Shot on Black Magic 4K camera, Post in FCP. Thanks!