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Thanks Bro!!

So the other day I posted a thread asking you guys to email me so I could send you my script in exchange for feedback. But, I've decided to just throw it on here so I could get more. Thanks a lot for the support! Here's the link...

Thanks.

Because whenever I post a link to google drive the formatting gets all messed up and people complain... I don't know what to use for a link, honestly.

Hello my fellow filmmakers, I was hoping I could get some feedback on my newest script for a short film I plan to start shooting very soon. My email is jriver1991@gmail.com If your interested, please shoot me an email and I'll send it to you ASAP.

You're right. I guess I went a little overboard with the exposition. Thanks!

Wow... Well, honestly this was written as just something for practice in shooting. It's easy, and I don't have a ton of resources. I'll look over it again and see what I can change and what I can completely cut out. But I still plan on shooting it lol. Thanks for the feedback though!

Okay so I posted a thread last night with a link to the same script. I don't use Google drive all that much so I forgot to make it view-able to people with the link. I also had to make a few changes. But anyways, here it is. Positive and negative feedback is greatly appreciated! Thanks in...

Lol! Thanks!!!

So I got this 12 page script for a short film. It reads pretty quick though as it's mostly dialogue driven. Any positive or negative feedback is greatly appreciated. Thanks a lot in advance! https://docs.google.com/document/d/1iEmp594VVwfpSymtTZ9ko96_O5id92dRkrpHRDta1Hg/edit

You mean Agent Perry, not Owen lol.

Yeah sorry a script editor lol.

Yes, I want to direct and possibly act in this thing asap. But I need an editor to help move this process along lol. Would you be at all interested?

I'm not entirely sure what genre this script would be placed in. But I guess you could call it a thriller :lol:. Any feedback, positive or negative, is greatly appreciated. This is just the first draft, so it's definitely a little ruff around the edges. Also, I'm currently looking for a decent...

I know there a lot of laws and copyright issues against product placement and using an artist's music without permission. We all know that, but I was wondering if I could get away with mentioning "The Phantom of the Opera" on Broadway along with prop fake tickets to said show? Is that okay...