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Story seems interesting, light mostly not and sound definetly not if you want an opinion. So unfortunately I'm not paying;)

Great job! The work really shows. Unfortunately the story didn't hold my interest so I didn't watch it all. I didn't like the opening credits, they look clunky. Too much hand held camera. I also didn't like the captioned time transitions. I would prefer more narrator in the introduction of the...

Do you have a trailer? It's not easy to convince people to sacrifice 35 minutes of their attention. I made it through the first 5 minutes, so unfortunately it didn't hold my enterest, there were also some issues with continuity editing.

Thank you! Could you please give me some clue about the lack of timing issue, it's definitely an essential thing and so much easier to grasp for a first time viewer.

Thanks a lot! It's ADR, no filters, just hiss reduction and exactly the same spot, so maybe it's just a cheap microphone. I didn't know how to move the thread which I posted in a wrong section, so I decided to double post and it was definitely worth it just to get this one opinion. I'm sure you...

Hi, check out my first short film "Love and Marriage - Hooked on Fishing". It's a satire of marriage in 60 seconds. I'll appreciate any constructive criticism. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sWPsZ_rAScs Paul

Far enough, I added captions. Tell me more:)

I like the sound, but the acting seems little caricatured, unless that was the goal. Maybe you could compress the detail's close-ups to make them pass faster, like in Requiem for a Dream for example. I admit I didn't make it to the end though.

It lacks the actor's close-up, maybe some sounds from the stomach could help the story.

You definetly improved your skills. I don't think you could use any shots from the previous video because there is a difference in quality, but it's not a waste, come on, you learned something. So people moving, static, long shots and close-ups, animals, landscape, this is what would make it...

It's pleasant to look at. I'm not in position to critique video clips, but I wonder if you would consider adding some shots of people's emotions?

I like most of the pictures, I would say you're more a cameraman than a director. The directing and the story are the weak parts, not to be cruel. Feel free to judge mine in return;)

Hi Nick, I live in New Orleans and I make short films. Hit me up if you're interested in collaborating.

Hi Daniel, I also live in New Orleans. Are you still active on the forum? I'd be glad to get in touch if you're interested in collaborating.

Thanks! This is a deep south accent. It's usually hard for people not familiar with it. I couldn't understand some people in New Orleans when I first moved down here. For reference you can watch some of the 'southern' movies like "Sling Blade", enjoy some spicy accents in "Deliverance" or...

Hi, check out my very first film "Love and Marriage - Hooked on Fishing". It's a satire of marriage in 60 seconds. Although it's short it was a long way for me. I'll appreciate any constructive criticism. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sWPsZ_rAScs Paul

Hi! I'm a beginer filmmaker living in New Orleans, although it may not be an up-to-date info in a couple of months. I constantly relocate, looking for 'something'. I was just googling a filmmaking forum and here it comes. I'm really excited about the community I discovered here and I'm happy to...