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Just a quick thought... you say your setting is "100 years ago," but do recall that 100 years ago the world was very much preoccupied with a little thing called World War I... although it did start in July 1914, so I guess if your story starts literally in early 1914, you are (just barely) ahead...

If I may... the "formula" for loglines that I learned and seems to hold true is: 1. Goal 2. Obstacles 3. Stakes So, for this story, it seems like Lucky Hardwood's came every close, but needs a small boost in the goal section. Try this on: Determined to survive his term of service in the...

Heh heh... that's right, I'm everywhere at once and nowhere, too. You'll never see me until the instant after you smell me coming up behind you. And by then it's too late. Chimps don't take showers, you see. The output end of a chimp's alimentary canal is a place you don't want to be too close...

Hi all, Just want to say hi (or perhaps let out a piercing simian screech) and that I'm glad to be here. I just learned of the site a couple of days ago, and have been checking out the quality of dialogue and found it to be quite high... surprisingly high. Thus I am looking forward to some...

Yeah you BETTER have chimpPhobia when the chimp in question is homicidal! :yes:

Hi all, first time post here. I had to register to add something to this thread (was about to register anyway, though). It drives me CRAZY when in seemingly every movie where someone has a revolver, they always have to swing the cylinder out and spin it, whereupon it makes that horrible cliche...