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OK, here's a rewrite:

Yeah, I'm beginning to realize that Alexis is somewhat like Princess Donna as well. I've written 10 pages, so we have around 10 minutes of screentime. The first act is done, and the second act is beginning. I'm still trying to figure out the genre of this screenplay.

Here's another rewrite Hi guys, here's another rewrite:

Thanks! I'm so used to working in print media, I keep forgetting a screenplay isn't a book!

I don't plan on ignoring people who try to help me out. Thanks for the advice. BTW, here's a rewrite that's in progress. I'm providing more background to the characters, and making the set up longer. Please continue to give advice.

Yeah, I'll remove the sex scene from this post. Thanks for the information. And why exactly is my dialogue unrealistic?

That makes more sense. Thanks.

Here's two extra scenes I just wrote:

Yeah, it's kinda more a short erotic film rather than straight-out porn (porn doesn't have *any* semblance of a plot, erotica does). Porn doesn't have 15 minutes of set-up. And yes, porn does have scripts. They're short and usually flat, but they're there. Seriously, what's wrong with it?

NSFW: Please critique my very first screenplay Hi guys! I've recently completed my very first short screenplay. A young TS porn star finds love in a lonely radiologist at a bar. I'm still trying to come up with a title. Even though it's only 8 pages, I expect the running length to be around...

I'm a 21 year old transgirl (although, TBH, "shemale" kinda describes me better) here looking to meet people and make friends. I used to be a microbiology student in the UK, at least until i returned home, and my parents took my HRT, girl things, and stopped funding my degree, blech. I've...