Thank you for all of the great advice! You really opened my eyes to all of the possibilities available to me when structuring in 6 acts. I have read a few screenplays, but now I think I'll read them more often.
I guess if he killed Will's father it would make far more sense, because then he...
I think I also forgot to mention that we are both under 16, so we're still trying to figure the writing process out a bit
Page 7 is also just where it picks up. I do agree that the beginning was irrelevant. I'll try improving that.
This is a script that I'm working on, and I'm just
wondering what the opinion was from this
community before I start production. Thanks. http://www.fileden.com/files/2012/4/25/3296959/DissecTV.pdf