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Although it is very difficult for me to make truly applicable suggestions in such an abstract context, I do think you are right in adding more character development. You have introduced the main character, so the audience at least knows what is most important about him. So add a piece of...

I am unsure as to how much reworking of the script you are interested in, but I could simply give some ideas that might help with the punch line. Instead of having a man inexplicably dressed in a samurai suit of armour, perhaps you could use this character, as well as the main character...