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interesting story. but: horrible acting, and you could see the dry ice the the bottom of the glass. but it had some good dialogue.

POLICE LINE: CAUTION MOTHER FUCKER this is probably the most idiotic line i have ever read in a script. take it out. it makes no sense. also, you are right about the script not having that much swearing in it. i don't mind it anymore. however, the script is so badly written in some parts...

lets just say the fucking dialogue turned me off to your fucking script. so many swear words that they lost effect in about 2 minutes. i would take some of them out. scratch that, i would take MOST of them out.