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Well this script is meant to be read to the end. So you having read only a few pages means nothing, beacuse I have it put so the begining is at the end. Do you even know why the Masked Man is doing what he is doing? Do you know who the Masked Man is yet? My characters are not even meant to be...

This script has a lot less cussing then a lot of Rated R scripts, Usual Suspects being the top one that I can remember. I don't even think the cussing is that bad. Cursing alot is what a lot of people do. People cuss randomly when they are mad, distraught, or terrified. I know lots of people...

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Thanks for the corrections, I do not know Spanish very well, so I just went to babblefish.com. I know I have a lot of cursing, but I love cursing in movies. For me, it seems more realistic, because in my area, everyone cusses for no reason. Thanks again.

I've completed my first screenplay, after awhile of reading these forums, I thought I would like you guys to critique it. I already registered it with a screenplay holding website, so I might as well leave a link. http://jonesthepirate.com/Movie.htm Please be brutal and honest, if you hate...