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  1. jrsmithson

    Crypto Shadow - Short Script

    Hello writers, it's been an eternity since I last posted a script on this site. I've been studying "Story" by McKee and tried to apply some of his ideas. Any criticism would be appreciated. I hope it's a fun read. It is 6 pages, approx. 3 minute read (2 short scenes) http://docdro.id/DVUj5V3
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    Which script is better?

    Hey Indietalkers, I finished polishing up these two short scripts. They are very different. The first was transcribed from a short story I wrote, and the second was written directly as a script. The first took many hours and a lot of thought, the second I wrote in an hour. I am at a crossroads...
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    Repossession- A 7 page script

    Hey guys! I wrote this up today in about 3 hours, but I spent most of the time on the story. I'm reading Robert McKee's Story; I'm on the part about character arcs, so I tried to incorporate them into the writing. I hope it comes through. My idea for the ending is that . Hope it's fun to read, I...
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    I Started Out Optimistic-short script

    Currently revising, will repost. :)
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    My Organ Lottery- 3 pages

    The last 2 lines of dialogue came to me in my sleep this morning. It sort of set the tone for the piece. It's a quick read. :) https://docs.google.com/viewer?a=v&pid=explorer&chrome=true&srcid=0B330vuSlEZmeNWM3YWVhOGItOGFiYS00NzRiLWE5MWItMjViOTgxNzIwMjU3&hl=en&authkey=COqsmOoJ
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    Fast Talker-short script

    Disregard- poorly written script, removed-sorry for inconvenience. ok, heres the script, wrote it in under an hour as a challenge. https://docs.google.com/viewer?a=v&pid=explorer&chrome=true&srcid=0B330vuSlEZmeZTBlNDNmNDUtYmVmMC00MjVhLThkMDYtN2UxNDJmOTAwOTY2&hl=en&authkey=CNH2lk0
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    unhappy marriage-short script

    Hmmm... yeah this is a dirty little story, I'll try to clean it up and repost. I guess since I can't delete this post I'll ask a question. How did you learn how to write interesting screenplays? Did you practice? Read other screen plays. Learn how to act? How do you come up with dialogue and...
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    Short script: "gallant bitch"-7 pages

    I wrote this scene over a few days. I have no idea what I'm doing, so criticism would be greatly appreciated. It's my first script attempt. check it out if you get a chance :) http://www.mediafire.com/?5cp8uxmtam35b6a
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