Can someone give me feedback or a little critique on my script for workshop I have to turn it end here is my first 10 pages
FADE IN:
INT. TYSON'S BEDROOM - GLUING A PICTURE - DAY
Close on fingers gluing a picture of TYSON, CHRIS, JASON and PIERRE in the Guild Book.
TYSON (V.O.)
Aristotle...
I have a twitter account and the people that are following me are not enough film people so I want a lot of film people following me and I will follow them back
here is
my twitter name hit me up anytime
http://twitter.com/DirectorIzunna