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Intimidation.

Sometimes here my comment is "cut the first scene" or "cut the first half". This time I'd want the first dialogue to vanish.

A delightful concept, with fresh acting. Note: Could keep mom in frame for a while before she says "Oh".

Mc must mean split screen. Same thing, two angles.

Good looking footage and well performed. I see a pattern in the cuts. The predictability there steals attention it shouldn't get.

One second after the POV switch:

Very nice :thumbsup:

Something tells me that Steven is doing some intense rewriting now as he knows what to look for. Get those scenes to work, man. Then plug in the phones.

The Jaws-like sound effect fills the room. Pretty awesome.

I think they mean the whole scene. Scene structure.

And that is a hell of a camera move. Did you invent it? If so you should mention it, because it is about to be sto-o-len.

Yup, Velusion hits the spot... and mussonman knows his stuff, too.

You don't mention how it ends, but I see what you're looking for, from the information you give. Harper can't keep a man in her life. Her mother made her this way and she finds the answer in Delilah. It ends with a new boyfriend who respects her for who she truly is. All thanks to what she...

Found it interesting that you've risen the stakes through increasing camera shakes. Sort of replaced storytelling with camera terror, but now I read that it wasn't intentional. Maybe you shouldn't talk too much and let the art speak for itself?

Smooth and sympathetic, Sally. Must have hit right with your futuristic vision to get those nominations, baby.

Yeah, seems you've spent your time wisely... and market New York as better than Texas.

The theme could not be better. The execution makes sense, is really good at first, a bit all over the place, about to slip through the fingers towards the end.

Sorry everyone. Didn't mean to limit your creativity with my genre question. Assumed he knows already. Genre doesn't limit me, obviously.

Genre, please. You already know your genre, for sure.

Holy crapsy. The exterior shots are incredible. Make a version where you get rid of the whole first half and open with the first ext shot. Awesomness, man. Flowers in the water - incredible. Followed by an underwater shot.