Comedy or drama (or a dramedy :)
Given a limited budget, I'd rather put my money into some good acting and a solid crew than VFX, props, and/or stunt work.
-CG
Giving suggestions on a finished product seems a bit useless, but bear with me since I'm only doing so to flex my creative muscle some....
I liked it, but it felt a little flat to me.
I think starting his emotional fall outside would have yielded more contrast and helped forge the idea he was...