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    critique Dan's Shadow - a screenplay for review and feedback

    Title: Dan's Shadow Logline: Dan is a Man hunted by his shadow Diana tries to help him with "shadow work" but the more she tries the worse it gets till the bitter end. Genre: Drama-Horror Format: Short Film Pages: 7 Feedback: yes every kind of feedback is welcomed. grammar - plot - dialogues -...
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    critique Middle Eastern Punk - a script to review and give feedback on

    title: Middle Eastern Punk logline: Tel Aviv small punk scene in the early 80's as seen from the eyes of Yoni a young man who escaped from military service during the first israel-lebanon war. genre: Drama / coming of age / LGBT+ format: Short Film pages: 29 what kind of feedback I'm interested...
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    hello nice to meet you...

    Hello Everyone. My Name is Ronen Blumberg, I'm 44 years old from Israel. I have been into Creative Writing for the last 14 years (mostly poetry and short stories and screenplays in Hebrew). although I am not a fan of Pop Culture I still do like to tell stories and so I'm trying to learn the...
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