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  1. Constantin

    critique Feedback - Plot Development for a Love Short Story

    Hello friends, I am writing an original short story and would love some feedback. I know the formatting needs work, and the scenes are misplaced in places, but I will fix that in future revisions. What I am wondering is how to improve the STORY. I was hoping to make it a 10 minute short but I...
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    format Science Fiction Screenplay - A Short Story

    Hi There .... I am just completing a short story and need some advice about how to handle alien language and telepathy in terms of formatting it within a screenplay. I have attached what I have so far and any suggestions would be appreciated!
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    treatment Need help with PLOT and TREATMENT

    Hello...I have a rather interesting request. I am trying to write a drama about two identical twins that grow up to be teens, but unaware that they have been separated (either at birth or very shortly after). Originally in my first draft (attached), the mom takes her twins home thinking that...
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    story ROSHAMBO - An idea for a limited 5 episode series

    Greetings everyone I have had this idea for a multi episode series for a few weeks now and think its time to share it with like minded folks in hopes I can interest a few of you to contribute to it collaboratively. The plan is to present it first as a multi-episode motion comic series on...
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    Hello From Guelph

    Hello, I am interested in the world of screenplays and found this forum