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  1. jsmithson

    Comment by 'jsmithson' in media 'Infinitus Main Trailer'

    Awesome teaser! Be sure to update when it’s available to watch... I’ll admit the anticipation is growing, waiting to see all the cool stuff in this production.
  2. jsmithson

    watch 2007 | A Short Film

    Great short film!
  3. jsmithson

    critique BackTrack Short Script critique requested

    Really? That's great, I was about to give up on it. I have an awesome story I just wrote, but I want to practice filmmaking a little bit before I bite off more than I chew. Thanks directorik, I feel a little more confident about going forward with it. Just got the actors a minute ago, awesome!
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    critique BackTrack Short Script critique requested

    Thanks for the detailed feedback, I appreciate it. After these critiques, I feel there are too many problems with the story to futz with it any more. I have plenty of other stories to work with, and I already have 3 short scripts written. I might just start from scratch... Thanks again guys!
  5. jsmithson

    critique BackTrack Short Script critique requested

    Thanks a lot guys, awesome points. I just rewrote a bunch of it with your feedback in mind. I tried to make the reveal more natural, instead of just a "random Chinese delivery man". If you have any other thoughts I'd love to hear. Thanks again!
  6. jsmithson

    Comment by 'jsmithson' in media 'Compulsion | Horror Short Film | 2018'

    Really well done! Almost perfect. This is quality film making. You should have much more views on YouTube. Best of luck on your next film!
  7. jsmithson

    critique BackTrack Short Script critique requested

    Thanks a lot for the feedback. I tried my best to copy the format of a screenplay I found online. And I'm typing it up in a google doc... probably shouldn't be doing that. Think I'll buy the Fade In screenwriting program to work with. Thanks for the tip.
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    critique BackTrack Short Script critique requested

    Thanks bald man. I just edited the post to make all of that clear. Hope you enjoy reading it.
  9. jsmithson

    critique BackTrack Short Script critique requested

    This is a very short script for a film I will be shooting some time early next year. Page length: 4 pages Synopsis: James and his girlfriend Natasmai have a funny relationship. She can understand him, but James doesn’t know her language. When he finds out what’s on her mind, his world is...
  10. jsmithson

    Hello folks!

    Hi there, I'm a copywriter living in Baltimore. I've been writing fiction for 18 years, and just started shooting films again. Looking forward to contributing to the indie talk fraternity. All the best, –J.R.
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