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    archived-videos My new short Film

    I made this film for pennys and with only a three person production team so please don't expect a masterpiece. Critique would be highly appreciated :) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k-oiMaOju7g.
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    archived-videos Please criteque my film

    Wow, false dichotomy much. You're basically telling me if those three elements were all spot on and everything else was terrible you would have a rubbish film...No shit. I said they are the most important things, not that they single handedly makes a film good. My tutor told me that, he was...
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    archived-videos Please criteque my film

    25 why?
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    archived-videos Please criteque my film

    A few years
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    archived-videos Please criteque my film

    This is was the ad, I did the editing and came up with the idea for it. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BPAT1vm3koo . It seemed like you winding me up because you were implying I had zero talent and didn't know anything about framing etc. I'm a film student not a professional, I guess it's my...
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    archived-videos Please criteque my film

    Then be constructive with criticism instead of trying to wind me up. I'm primarily a writer/editor so framing and lighting were out of my hands. An advert I worked on with just 2 people made it into the top 5 of a national advert competion so I clearly am not as incompetent as you are trying to...
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    archived-videos Please criteque my film

    Wow there are some real stuck up douches on this site. How about you read what I said before launching into a tiade. Just to clarify once again...This was shot on my mates £200 handheld camera. The remake will be done on a canon c100. Hence why I'm interested in the story and what changes can be...
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    archived-videos Please criteque my film

    This is very much an amateur film which I made in just 2 days with friends, hence why I'm looking to remake it and make it better due to how rushed it was . Technical issues really aren't an issue because they would inevitably be better this time around. I'm very much more interested in story. I...
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    archived-videos Please criteque my film

    Not an mtv fan i take it? ;p I don't have netflix do you have a Youtube clip of what you were trying to show??
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    archived-videos Please criteque my film

    Hiya, I'm looking for critique on a film I made a few months ago. I'm going to be remaking it soon and I'd like to know what I could change to make it better. I'm aware that it is out of focus in places, I'm more interested in critique regarding story/dialogue. Any feedback would be hugely...
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