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Trip,
I think you have good comedic instincts.
Feedback:
- There needs to be an escalation for the deaf man when he denies the Don his money. i.e maybe he tries to cut his eyes out so that he's both deaf and blind, or maybe since its a comedy go for something thats silly.
- The ending did...
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