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  1. Comikkaze

    Need advice on drawing viewer emotion for short film

    No one could have said it better. I nearly teared up. I think you have the gift :D
  2. Comikkaze

    How do you reconcile a broken family

    I like LOL's suggestions. An ambiguous ending is needed here I feel. The conflict that makes him run can be anything from too much pressure having to take up the slack caused by their mother's absence or simply overhearing his father say something about wishing they hadnt adopted him. Either...
  3. Comikkaze

    story Short Story idea

    So if you look at it, it's kind of like 3 different levels of characters all trying to craft their version of the perfect ending
  4. Comikkaze

    story Short Story idea

    There is the potential to cut back and forth between the real writer and the main character or you can completely bring the real writer into existence at the end of the story when the realization is made. Make the entire story 3rd person until the end when he discovers then switch to first...
  5. Comikkaze

    Trying to get noticed..

    Yeah, your best bet is using this forum (there is a section for it) to post your video links and we can go and comment, like, critique, whatever, but bottom line is that it raises the attention rating on your video and YouTube will move it further up in the search results
  6. Comikkaze

    Trying to get noticed..

    Thats where tags become a grey (gray?) area.... you want to have a lot of tags, but you want them to be relevant. The tags for a hp video could be something like "Harry, Potter, And, The, Deathly, Hallows, Part, 1, 2, *name of camera*, *name of mic*, *name of editing software*, *name of actors...
  7. Comikkaze

    Trying to get noticed..

    great example with the HP video. Yeah that seems to be the best way. It may seem like a cop out and stupid to make videos just because it's a popular topic but maybe current events can become your muse. Use it as an exercise for yourself, try to make a video based on current events. You are...
  8. Comikkaze

    Trying to get noticed..

    I have some videos of me reviewing technology. I uploaded them months ago and let them go. I just kept replying to comments that asked me questions. Just the other day I got an invitation in my email from YouTube to monetize my future videos. Now I am going to use that as a springboard to start...
  9. Comikkaze

    Sony HandyCam SR47

    I am selling my SonyHandyCam DCR-SR47 on ebay. Bidding is starting at 100 dollars. If you are interested at all, head over there. It is in perfect condition. Little to no cosmetic damage and is only about a year or two old. It was a Christmas gift a while ago and I really liked it and used it a...
  10. Comikkaze

    tryna build my portfolio free custom graphics any one???

    I am interested. I will PM you as well
  11. Comikkaze

    story Short Story idea

    Well maybe when he opens the door, he realizes that he never remembers actually leaving his house or even moving in. That leads to him not remembering a childhood, and then the parallels between his novel and his life make him realize that he is in fact a character
  12. Comikkaze

    story Short Story idea

    You could just end it with the realization that nothing is real and leave it up to the reader's imagination how he used that information. Maybe that information is the catalyst that helps him finish the novel because he had no real pressure or maybe it does the opposite and he works on crafting...
  13. Comikkaze

    Using SpidVid vs. Craigslist

    So SpidVid allows you to post the details of your script, select what type of help you need, and then receive bids on your project for people to provide their assistance. The project can then be distributed with or without ads to earn either money or exposure. Then you can rate your crew/cast...
  14. Comikkaze

    story Short Story idea

    Great idea. I like it about the dark outside with emptiness because the real writer doesnt know how to write an outdoor landscape
  15. Comikkaze

    story Short Story idea

    Sounds like you have some good building blocks then. Good luck on this
  16. Comikkaze

    archived-videos The Robber & the Robber

    It was a good film and I really liked the edits and the quick cut from door closing to a close up of his face was nice. You did a great job. If you are proud of it then don't let anyone discourage you. Constructive criticism is one thing but don't feel the need to apologize. Just absorb and...
  17. Comikkaze

    Need advice on drawing viewer emotion for short film

    Sounds like a good ending. Depending on how it leads to it, it would be really emotional. Kind of pulling a Remember Me ending where the main character dies as the movie ends. Kind of randomly but when you realize what happens you are left wanting to just cry and cry
  18. Comikkaze

    Need advice on drawing viewer emotion for short film

    No I think I might have a better idea, (feel free to disagree lol) but I like the idea of him realizing that it was her death that he saw in his dream, he is in love with the girl so he goes back to save her. After beating her to the accident and saving her or preventing it, he and the girl...
  19. Comikkaze

    I have rewritten this scene: what do you think?

    Updated again. Kinglis, tell me if it's anymore interesting but I don't quite understand what you are saying. I made some changes and took about a page worth of useless dialogue off of the script
  20. Comikkaze

    Alesis palmtrack handheld digital audio recorder

    Yeah I am very interested. If I haven't bought one by then then I will definitely look at yours
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