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    short movie feedback

    I originally wrote this on final draft and copy paste to a rtf, that is why the format is all messy. Many people doesn't like the sex scene :) I have to work on that. I m rubbish in dialogue actually so I understand ur point of views. Thank again for the feedback, really appreciate!!
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    short movie feedback

    Thank Lando2 I wrote this script ages ago in 2h. I'm rewriting it in proper English with more details. Thank for the constructive feedback. the girl from the club is a different girl than the one who get promoted. I ll work on that confusion. I will remove the last line from the script as it s...
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    I need a crew. Who's from london?

    My scripts are in English. But my point is not to only do my scripts, but rather gather with some wanna be filmmaker and play with what we can do.
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    I need a crew. Who's from london?

    English is not my first language. I m French.
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    I need a crew. Who's from london?

    Hello, I wrote some scripts and would like to turn them into film. Sadly no one in my entourage care about movies. I'm looking for some movies passionate who want to make movies. If you have accessories that will be even better. YOU HAVE TO BE FROM LONDON. You are not afraid to shoot movies...
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    archived-videos Can people please take a look at my film "Dead Tiger"?

    Surprisely the acting is good.
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    archived-videos My Vampire Drama Short Film - Is it festival material?

    The contrast of the picture for the night shot is a but annoying. Also the locations are not nice, especially that living room. Also during the dialogue there are some long pause between characters, bad editing I suppose. The plot isnt great either. A man will do anything for the woman he...
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    short movie feedback

    Hello I wrote a short movie years ago. I never shared it with anyone. it s also the first draft. Can anyone give me feedback please. It s only around 10 pages. The story is a metaphor from a strong message to people. http://www.mediafire.com/view/?bljudqn1wjd4v04 Thank
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    archived-videos Myself twice in the same shot

    Hello a bit a experiment with my camera. Using imovie I mange to duplicate myself in one shot. I had no script when I did this. I just improvised. Note that this is my first video ever make. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v= http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p4ZE7GVdi9k
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    Newbie From London

    Hello There, I m a screenwriter. I wrote a short movie and I m now writing a full length script. I would love to shoot the short movie I wrote but I don't have any material , no budget...
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