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    archived-videos Surviving Evidence- my new feature

    It was pretty okay. It started to drag about 30 minutes in. The actors did a solid job in my opinion.
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    archived-videos Political animation... :P

    Fairly entertaining. I don't see why anyone struggles to answer this question. I would have asked the reporter what thawed the earth from the last ice age since man was living in caves with none of our evil technology. That immediately would have the reporter stammering.:lol:
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    archived-videos You Can (Energy Commercial)

    Pretty decent. I would have mentioned solar lighting for the yard at night.I think exterior illumination of some sort will save you more money than it costs when it deters the thieves:lol:
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    archived-videos Raw Heat episode 2: Match made in hell

    The guy playing the chief gave and outstanding performance! He also has a great look for that role. The thugs gave passable performances as well. Your main two guys are the weakest actors in the whole thing. This was pretty darn entertaining truth be told. I enjoyed it.
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    archived-videos Lysol - The Uncaped Hero

    It was relatively funny in a random sort of way. Random humor is my favorite.
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    archived-videos Pitch/Teaser: The Kohlman Files

    The production values sure look high. Good luck!:yes:
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    archived-videos "Vision" - short made at NYFA at Universal Studios, Los Angeles

    The film did not appeal to me. It was done okay though. You do need to flog your camera operator for leaving that tuft of lint on the lens for the entire short. That was terribly distracting.
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    archived-videos Occupy Newfoundland short doc (feedback needed!)

    You should have touched more on the thievery and sexual assaults going on within the US ows camps. Also, it should have been mentioned more clearly that the United States is a republic, not a pure democracy. This film only told people half of the story if you were linking the Canadian movement...
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    archived-videos Cats, Guns, & Viral Videos ~New Comedy Short

    I loved it in general:lol: I'll let the more qualified guys go after technicalities, but speaking as a viewer this one was a lot of fun.
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    archived-videos Chillerama - promotional music vid

    The music video is really quite good. I just watched the entire movie. Anne Frankenstein is pretty entertaining.
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    archived-videos Shoot Out

    That looked like an episode of tha Ateam. No one ever gets hit on that show either...
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    archived-videos Mood piece for Burpees.

    That was very disjointed and overly long in my opinion as a viewer. The mood it set for me was dark and heavy. The music was a total distraction and the silent section at the end took me to the opposite end of the distraction scale. I really think lighter and more cheerful in a shorter clip...
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    archived-videos Strange Music Video

    Well. That was weird in a Monty Python tv show(not their movies) kind of way. The entire feel of that clip was similar to their look. Also, bonus points for working the robot dance in for those few seconds:lol:
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    archived-videos The Peak (Sheffield Adventure Sports Festival Shorts Entry)

    The slow motion jump at 1:20 is a bit too slow in my opinion. You also lost steam in the action right near the end of the woods running. That said, it is really a pretty piece of work. The scenery was great and that crazy dude jumping on the rocks actually held my attention...and I could care...
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    archived-videos Project ETi: Forbidden Alliance

    If that is the first short clip you have made, it is pretty impressive. The sound was not great though. Sound quality eas the weakest thing in the clip. What sound equipment are you using? The woman doing the protecting was in slow motion at all times...but then, hollywood has that in all of...
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    archived-videos Cats, Guns, & Viral Videos ~New Comedy Short

    I would love to see a link to the video.
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    archived-videos Nerf Backyard Battle

    Pretty entertaining. Some of the effects looked really nice.
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    archived-videos Zombie Party - a short film w/ an important social message concerning teen drug abuse

    I watched the entire thing. The music was very good in my opinion. Some of the sound was very tinny sounding. The hallway outside the hospital room for example was really bad. The story is a,neat idea, but it didn't grab me. I felt like I was just along for the ride. The night scenes needed...
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    archived-videos 48 Hour film challenge - Tape

    I do not like this type of film...but I like this one. It is surpringly moving for so short a clip. I think it is exceptional for what it is.
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    archived-videos Sci-fi kun-fu "Somnius" trailer

    I applaude the use of miniatures. It just looks much more real to me that computer generated objects.
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