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I think it would have been better if it were edited down some. Still, I lost it at 9:50 when the guy rides in on his "horse":lol:

My third attempt at a short is now finished and ready for criticism. It is a comedy about a Star Wars nerd who works in a gun distributor's customer service shop and will resort to any lengths to deny a refund. He is also a highly skilled craftsman with only the finest of tools to ply his trade...

"Between two evils, I choose the one I've never tried before" :lol:

Fun clip. Anyone else have sound sync issues on playback? On my droid it was like watching a dubbed kungfu movie.

This was not even my kind of movie, but I enjoyed it all the same. The guy playing the father has a wonderful "look" in general. Weathered and genuine. :yes:

Loved it.

The part that had me chuckling was watching just how inept the first guy was trying to start the fire with no tinder,etc. You could tell he really had no idea. I did think the eagle scout was an axe murderer at first, so you got me there. I think this clip could be funnier with better acting...

You picked a perfect guy to play tbe douchy guy. That dude is rocking it so hard:lol: That is intended in sincerity. He is pulling it off big time. Maybe uses fu$k a bit too much to seem realistic. Good character. The girl does okay, but you can tell she is hesitant to use profanity for...

I think a "windscreen" will be most helpful. Also, the camera was jerking around in an almost mechanical fashion. It made it highly distracting for me. Handheld can be tough for sure, but man, that camera sure was jerking around a lot in those shots of the guy just sitting there. :hmm:

The guy is pretty darn convincing in his despair. The story as I believe it will unfold seems pretty unique and interesting. I watched both trailers and neither of them had any punch to them. They just meandered along. I suspect the story has good potential. I think the trailers don't tell...

I meant I never clicked on the bottom of the video bar to see how much time was left like I do for boring clips. That is a good thing :lol: *Edit I just watched it on my mac. Did you intend everything to be so green tinted...even outside per the actor's faces?

Seems like a cool idea. Serious question; Has your model in the pics had cataract surgery on her right eye? It appears it is reflective in your pics. The surgery causes that effect. That would be a cool effect in a movie in low light. The nun with glowing eyes and a mini gun. :lol:

The cartoon-like sound effects(the car skidding to a stop while parking, etc.) took away from the gritty tension of the short I think.

I generally liked it. I didn't scan time left even once. Cool in a psyche/sherlock holmes kind of way. The worst part was the sound at :30. Weird echo there. That was all I was put off by. I enjoyed it.

It looked like a dude raping a baby doll. Not my thing. I have no constructive comment to offer beyond if he were trying to repulse, it was effective.:weird:

This one was much fun to watch.:lol:

That was a lot of fun to watch!

I made it two minutes. The camera guy was way too shaky to make that watchable for me. Maybe that was an effect you were after, but it was immensely distracting for me.

It looks well done, but it just does not grab me. I cannot figure out exactly why.

You almost lost me in the first minute. The sound quality was really bad there in the room it seemed. It got much better in the outdoor scenes. I enjoyed the end very much..."Iiiiiiiisssssss". Stab.:lol: