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    archived-videos Dolls for Strangers - a short film

    It looks well done and interesting.
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    archived-videos When to Kill - Short Film

    Parts of that were disturbing...I think that is good. Some of it was filmed a bit too dark for my tastes, but I think I see your motivation for that. The scene where the star bursts into the office building to get the location of the hit has really bad sound quality in the dialog. It almost...
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    archived-videos SHORT: No Place to Be

    How did the guy get out of debt at the end? That should have been made clear. Did he pay his debts and live within his means going forward? Did he default on his debt and leave his creditors and their families to eat the loss? You portrayed a good image of debt slavery, but you left the means...
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    XL2 pixelation in viewfinder and playback

    A comedy short featuring my bad acting and a homebreaking zombie with the working title "Early to Bed, Early They Rise"(I know...another zombie clip:lol: ) I think it will be interesting and humerous if I can get the film in my head to transfer to a tangible thing that is close to my vision. I...
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    XL2 pixelation in viewfinder and playback

    Got it back from canon five days after I mailed it off. They replaced the "recording unit" for $200 and change. This thing takes beautiful footage now!
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    How is my shots and editing in these scenes?

    There is some good work in there! The bat scene looks way fake. May want to edit that out or reshoot.
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    archived-videos The Zookeeper

    The blood at the end looked like chocolate syrup. The story didn't grab me. It all looked pretty decent though.
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    archived-videos 51 Days Project

    I am the least qualified guy to comment here as I have not even filmed my first short yet...I do have all my gear together now and my story board is done. Still, I do know what I like to watch. The trailer left me totally scratching my head. I could not tell what you were selling and that in...
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    archived-videos Rogue Cop School

    I enjoyed this very much. It was my kind of silly funny. It also had a weird 80's style cop drama vibe I liked. A solid A from me. The only distraction from maximum enjoyment was the shaky camera on the street scenes at the mid point of the short. This is among the funnest shorts I have seen...
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    archived-videos Nightguard - fist of the chancellor

    Mein Gott! Das war sehr lustig. Also, the blonde and the ladder climbing makes me want to see the movie.:lol:
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    archived-videos **Indie Zombie Short**

    This was well done in my opinion. The scenes were dark, but it is obvious why although a bit more light in some of the shots would have helped me enjoy it more. I generally enjoyed it. What tricks and tools did you use to create the lighting in this short? I believe I saw a hint of a blue gel...
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    archived-videos Pennsylvania Dutch Discount Store- Comedy Short

    I laughed out loud at the satanic toaster oven. The rest of the short was totally a flatline for me. The special effect flames were perhaps extra special in my opinion.
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    archived-videos Zomedy: Zombies + Comedy

    I loved the opening and closing. Very funny. I did not much care for the middle where they get drunk nor when they awoke. The guy walking out into a pack of zombies to escape thr zombies was fun though. I really dug the black and white footage.
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    archived-videos The Investment Scandal. Debut Short film.

    I watched the entire thing. There was an awful lot of walking while holding a bag going on. Also, for visual effect a bigger gun would hav3 looked better in the hands of that big guy. Yours looked like a starter pistol. That said, it was pretty decently done although I felt it dragged a bit...
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    archived-videos Celebrating Pain

    The actor was very convincing. Nice portrayal in my opinion. He did spend too long smoking for my tastes. I also am sceptical a straight man would be wearing that vest and shirt to a murder. Too fashionable. Also, he should have shot her in the trunk only if that is her firebird. If it is his...
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    archived-videos Life of a Spy - Teaser Trailer

    Honest question; Why do you suppose people will be drawn to watch a film based on a teaser that is by design not indicative of the film's content?
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    archived-videos Sexy Trash | Short Comedy Film

    I love comedy but the comedic timing and content here didn't do it for me. The videography looked very nice though.
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    archived-videos Life of a Spy - Teaser Trailer

    It reminded me of a jeans commercial. I could not tell what you were selling until the end.
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    archived-videos "Self-Help" A comedy webseries!

    Episode one was weak. Episode two was very enjoyable and funny. Episode three was ok...until the rap ego popped up...then it got funny. I enjoyed these. What did you shoot with?
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    archived-videos Dumbledore's Army: Revolution

    I think it is visually pretty darn decent! The effects were good too. I understand the difficulty in getting good sound in many of those shots, but the tinny sound really let down the rest of your effort in this clip. Put some work into better sound and it will be a tremendous improvement.
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