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    archived-videos Short Sci-Fi/Fantasy kinda Trailer :)

    Is "nazist" a word? The text intro seems contrived and oddly worded to me. The trailer seems a bit too vague on exactly what the story may be about.
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    archived-videos King Kong - A British Remake

    Pretty funny.
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    Need Dead Cat... not the windscreen, but an actual cat that is dead

    Go into the woods. Shoot an opposum. Paint it the same color as yout cat. Profit!
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    Shoot it now or later (when I'm better?)

    Make short films based off your screenplay to learn the craft. That is exactly where I am in my own development. I have a good story in my head, but lack the skill to do it justice...yet.
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    archived-videos Only You Can Help Save Our Noisiest Of Woodland Creatures...

    The explosion looked very fake. Still, it was my kind of twisted. I generally liked it.:lol:
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    archived-videos Okay, my second ever short film is done.

    Thank you very much for the honest criticism. In particular, your idea concerning the clock on the radio would have been a brilliant solution to my passage of time problem. I will be using that idea going forward.:yes:
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    archived-videos Assassin

    The twist at the end caught me by surprise. I thought the guy reading the paper would be the shooter. I thought it was an interesting film. The guy not noticing a gunman in the open at 50 yards seemed unlikely though. Should have hidden him better.
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    archived-videos Okay, my second ever short film is done.

    I appreciate the honest input. I will be working more on getting more interesting,dynamic shots going forward. I am so newbish that this was the first time I've ever shot anything using gels or even with more than one person in the scene. I have much to learn, but I am having fun learning the...
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    archived-videos Okay, my second ever short film is done.

    That's right. Clifford Timmons comes down with a strange illness unexpectedly when his inlaws fly in and he is forced to stay home alone by his concerned wife. He takes the opportunity to raid with his warcraft buddies. It's all good until his wife comes home early. I shot this one using the...
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    archived-videos The Silence - Doctor Who fan film

    Looked nice. Interesting idea as well.
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    archived-videos I Have A Bad Feeling About This - feature trailer

    Looks like fun to me. Good luck with funding!
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    archived-videos FILM: Halbschlaf – now online!

    Disturbing. I generally liked it.
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    How to find local film clubs...do they exist?

    That is a well reasoned and valid argument. I believe you are right. I will give it a go.
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    archived-videos THE ROOM

    I laughed out loud more than once :lol: You need a better mic or sound setup though. Lots of echo.
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    How to find local film clubs...do they exist?

    PM sent. Virginia Beach is not too far from Richmond. :cool:
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    How to find local film clubs...do they exist?

    Nothing for filmmaking yet in my area on that site. Thanks though!
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    How to find local film clubs...do they exist?

    I have a background of teaching things I am uncommonly skilled at. Film making is not one of them...yet:lol: I am just too unqualified to start such a group at this point in my learning process in my opinion.
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    How to find local film clubs...do they exist?

    I have spent a bit of time googling local film clubs in my area with little luck. How can one find listings of such clubs if they exist? I am looking to share my time and equipment with others who are likewise trying to learn more about the craft. Thanks for any input.
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    archived-videos New short "Significant"...

    I enjoyed this one quite a bit. The story is interesting. The thin guy delivering the beatdown is convincing. The cuts to the big guy were not quite as convincing.
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    archived-videos People (Short Film)

    Think about that bit. Who would pay to go see a film about nothing? Who would be interested in watching it?
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