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"Inside Llewyn Davis" 6/10 for the acting. It was well acted. A character portrait. Frustrating at times as you begin to feel a bit for Llewyn but it never comes to fruition. He couldn't even give up successfully.

Rewrite #1 of my tentpole sci-fi (to be followed by submission to a reputable coverage person, then another tweak/rewrite, then submission to legitimate contests, etc.) Continued writing of my adaptation screenplay. And if I have time, revisit continuing to write an espionage thriller that's...

I agree. That and the driving the gondola through the streets of Venice from one of the old bond films.

Just saw this with "Die Another Day" where Bond surfs with a Parachute on a giant iceberg caused wave, and then hovers and lands on another ice berg. It does exactly what you are referring to at the end: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P3CF3QER_h4

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Melissa McCarthy, Sarah Silverman or Amy Schumer. Of course I'm half joking...

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I would recut a new trailer. The reason is if I watch your trailer without you providing written context to preface it, I have no idea what it's about. So my recommendation is to provide a trailer that delivers what you wrote in text. The trailer should be the context.

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Ghost in the Shell - The animated version from the 90's. Was decent. I get what it was for it's time in terms of style and story, etc. As much as I respect and enjoy watching the occasional Japanese anime, there's a staple of it that always kinda irks me (both original Japanese audio or...

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So there is already a book to base this on? Ok so adapt it. Or is there a book that is inspiring you to write something simiar (different characters, story, etc.)? If there is already a book and you are adapting it, then we don't really factor into what story you should tell. You should tell...

Yes but now I'm questioning whether the OP is talking about one scene where each punch initiates a flashback within that scene or....something else.

Not sure if it would be correct but I'd try to do it using the minimum amount of whitespace as possible. Something along the lines of: With each punch the Bride makes against the wood, her knuckles become more bloody and Pai Mei remembers the past...

Welcome! It's a human sized flux capacitor!!! Just kidding but good job and keep it up.

:thumbsup: Some quotes that emphasize the point we are at: An idea not coupled with action will never get any bigger than the brain cell it occupied. ~ Arnold Glasow You cannot score a goal when you are sitting on the bench. To do so, you have to dress up and enter the game. ~ Israelmore...

I empathize with her situation as I have a close family member with a light form of the same. That said, it is creating for her an obstacle that is preventing her from accomplishing the necessary steps she needs to take in order to become a screenwriter. The Aspergers is winning right now. The...

I think you need to take the next step. http://www.indietalk.com/showpost.php?p=436447&postcount=25