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    archived-videos Things to Know - Livingston Steadworth

    Hey everyone, I've just uploaded a new short comedy film called "Things to Know - Livingston Steadworth" and I was hoping I could get some feedback on it. Thanks so much! Synopsis: "Though the networks are full of reality and educational TV shows, none are quite as popular and informative as...
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    archived-videos Gutter Trash - Episode 18: Rebecca Black

    The new episode of Gutter Trash, a short show where we take a look at some of the most brilliant thinker's opinions (real YouTube comments) on a wide array of topics, is out. The comment selection topic of the week is Rebecca Black! Comments and criticisms welcome...
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    archived-videos Gutter Trash - Episode 17

    Hey all, The new episode of Gutter Trash, our satire comedy series is out. We take a look at some of the most brilliant thinker's opinions on a wide array of topics. That is, YouTube comments. Today's topic: Charlie Sheen. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yb0YbupM9gA Thanks! - Tommy
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    archived-videos Small Talk - Short Film

    I agree. Thanks for the feedback. :)
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    archived-videos Small Talk - Short Film

    Conversations are perfectly acceptable styles of short film I think. It just touches on a different style of writing and theatrics. The shakyness was done intentionally, it's just there were times where I had to adjust my camera during a take which made it extra shaky. I couldn't do a lot of...
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    archived-videos Small Talk - Short Film

    As I said, I wasn't offended, I just thought it was a little much is all. But thanks :)
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    archived-videos Small Talk - Short Film

    I'm not personally offended honestly. But no matter how you prefix your statement it is an incredibly patronizing thing to say, given that we're not friends or anything like that. I want honest opinions, I just wish people wouldn't categorize statements like that as trying to be constructive.
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    archived-videos Small Talk - Short Film

    Richy, I'm glad you provided comments and criticisms, that is why I post here and on other forums. My only point of contention with bringing up the camera shake and "butchering" of the 180 degree rule is that I've said previously that I know of these issues and that it was not a good day for...
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    archived-videos Small Talk - Short Film

    Thanks for the thoughts, guys. But I really am surprised to see that pretty much no one here seems to understand satire. The film is not supposed to be taken dramatically at all. Leon is not actually sick at the end, he's faking sickness to get out of the conversation. The whole point of the...
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    archived-videos Small Talk - Short Film

    Thanks for the honest feedback everyone! As I said, in relation to the camera and sound problems there were issues with shooting that forced me to use the takes I had and we couldn't shoot again. It sucks, but sometimes you have to use what you've got even if it's not the best.
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    archived-videos Small Talk - Short Film

    Thanks, Euphony! In regards to the sound, I think what happened was the mic came partially unplugged from the audio device causing it to record half from the internal mics and the shotgun mic. Unfortunately I had to have actors run the sound because my normal guy wasn't available. Glad you liked...
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    archived-videos Small Talk - Short Film

    Thanks a lot for the constructive feedback! :) I agree about the camera...we didn't get to do as many takes as I would have liked and unfortunately the best ones happened to be the ones where my camera work wasn't up to par. Other than that, though, I'm glad you liked it. Thanks again for the...
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    archived-videos Small Talk - Short Film

    Hey all, Just finished up my most recent short film, titled "Small Talk." Comments and criticisms are more than welcome! What do you do when you're forced into a situation where you have to small talk with someone you don't like? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8Ft4Y9NXJbM...
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    archived-videos Gutter Trash - Episode 16: The Grab Bag

    Hey all, The new episode of Gutter Trash is out. We take a look at some of the most awful YouTube comments and read them in character. This weeks topic is the Grab Bag: the worst of the worst of all YouTube. Comments and criticisms are more than welcome...
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    archived-videos Chapel Hill - Short Comedy Sketch

    Thanks for the constructive feedback! In regards to the audio, I listened to it again and the levels sound quite equalized to me. This is all by ear though, I haven't done a decibel-to-decibel comparison. In relation to the editing, what jump cuts were you talking about at the end? I don't...
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    archived-videos Chapel Hill - Short Comedy Sketch

    To each his own, some people liked it, some people didn't. Could you elaborate about what you didn't find funny about it? Thanks!
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    archived-videos Chapel Hill - Short Comedy Sketch

    Hey all, Just finished up this new comedy sketch. Comments and criticisms are welcome! "Chapel Hill goes door to door selling everyday commodities that everyone needs." https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wvO98oIH-FY http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wvO98oIH-FY
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    archived-videos Gutter Trash - Episode 15: OJ Simpson

    Hey all, Just finished up episode 15 of Gutter Trash, a short show where we take a look at some of the most ridiculous YouTube comments. Today's comment topic is OJ Simpson. Comments and criticisms welcome! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rUG_bLRcyfI http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rUG_bLRcyfI
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    archived-videos Frank Stevens: Weatherman

    Hey all, Just did this short sketch the other day. Comments and Criticisms are more than welcome! Frank Stevens with channel 637 weather gives you the forecast update. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hdqrbvb8TOA http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hdqrbvb8TOA Thanks!
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