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Hey, as long as you're entertained I'm happy with that. :) Thanks for watching! I'll have to check out The Dead Hour.

I agree with DirtyPictures, you may have an interesting concept, but nothing happens. About a minute and a half, two minutes in, I started skipping around to see if it got more interesting...but it's still just guy sitting in a chair reading. I think you could have easily told this story in 2-4...

Hey all, I've just released a new a short comedy. I'd love to get some good comments and criticism. Let me know what ya'll think! :) This film is a short excerpt from a day in the life of a typical high school student. This is Day I: Stapled. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kSgerBrsWek...

Agree with the others. Interesting trailer though, I look forward to seeing the final film :)

Never heard of him, but I've also been told he is reminiscent of Jason Ritter! I guess the guy just looks like everyone! Thanks much for the comment and for watching. Glad you liked it :)

I agree it's too slow. Thanks for the c&c and watching :)

If it makes you feel better, I agree with both of you :)

Murdock, I like Jimmy as well! He's quite the child :P Sam, I agree about the moving throughout the house, it would have helped make things a bit more interesting. In retrospect I see that. I agree that the end is a bit loud as well. Thanks for the comments and criticisms and watching! :)

I agree, perhaps the teaser could have shown a little bit more or had some sort of tagline. It's sometimes hard to remove yourself from the story of your own film and put yourself in the audience's shoes. Thanks for the comments and the interest, though! It will be released on September 19th! I...

Well, while I do thank you for providing examples of real comedy, I have to say I didn't find any of those videos "funny." Raul was entertaining and humorous, but I didn't find it "funny." I smiled once. I'm not just trying to be difficult, I just didn't find them funny. I'm not saying my film...

Much like comedy the interpretation of messages on forums is entirely subjective, I was not trying to get defensive. I was merely stating that if you're not going to give constructive feedback then I will continue to accept that there are not necessarily larger faults with the production, rather...

I haven't gotten a TON of reviews on it, a couple have been friends/family, others have been acquaintances. Some of which I'd trust to be blatantly honest, some of which I'd trust to be biased, and some of which I just don't know. I agree, I just found "I don't find it funny" to be terribly...

Hey everyone, I wanted to make a post on here to share my next dramatic film with everyone in the hopes that I can get some good feedback. Trust is a short (approximately twenty minutes) action thriller that follows the chance meeting of two individuals on the road who quickly begin to...

Thanks so much dlevanchuk! I agree about the shakey cam, for some reason *I* was actually quite shakey that day. I was sitting on the kitchen counter in a very uncomfortable position and I felt like death! But I think it's not too bad, all things considered. Thanks for the detailed response and...

Hmm. Some people have said that they like it so unless you have a concrete reason why I'll just have to assume it's a matter of opinion.

Hey everyone This is a short that I filmed a couple months back and am just now able to release. I'd LOVE to get some good honest feedback and criticism on it. Let me know what ya'll think, this is how we get better "Jimmy, a brash student, has had his property stolen. His father must make a...

I know what you mean. Its always interesting to look back on older projects and think what you would do differently. A year later now, I know theres certainly a lot of things I'd do differently on my first short film. Film is a constant learning experience :) anyhow, like I said: good work overall!

I enjoyed it, the shooting style was very interesting and I'm sure it was very intentional that it be jarring the first time we see the woman completely in focus. I liked that a lot, playing with focus and shooting conventions to get a certain feel. The only thing that caught my eye was the...

I enjoyed these, but just a few things I noticed: First and foremost and mainly: the audio! I'm sure you know that tremendous audio can redeem a bad picture. That does not work conversely. For the most part your camera work and editing isn't too shabby, but the audio brings it down a few...

I feel like it's a bit slow and/or long. Perhaps rectifying that would help with the boredom issue?