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    archived-videos Trust - Short Thriller

    Interesting. Thanks for watching and for taking the time to tell me what you think :)
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    archived-videos Trust - Short Thriller

    Could you elaborate, please?
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    archived-videos Trust - Short Thriller

    Hey everyone, For those of you who may recall, probably 3ish weeks ago I uploaded the teaser for my thriller, Trust. I've finally released Trust to the world and would love to get some feedback from you all. Let me know what you think! Be honest, be harsh if you have to :) Thanks! Trust is a...
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    archived-videos The Chosen One: Part I The End of Days

    You're doing a terrible job of marketing this. Why would you think anyone would want to watch something that is proclaimed by one of it's creators to be not good in any way, shape, or form? You're basically asking us to watch it for how bad it is. That said, I started watching the trailer and...
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    archived-videos My first short film - Paranormal

    Good work. It actually didn't go where I expected it to go. The first thing I thought when he awoke was that he was dreaming the future and would actually cause the crash or some such. That said, I felt like there were a lot of loose ends that never really got tied up. The main one being, why...
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    archived-videos 'Toast' short film

    I agree and disagree with the above comments. It was interesting and different, but yes there were perhaps too many reused cuts. I should say though, don't put something in a scene just to lengthen it because the chances are, it will get dragged out because it wasn't supposed to be that long...
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    archived-videos JOHN WILHELM- funny action short

    These are the key right here. First off, come up with a story. The one thing I've learned since I started making films is that the biggest thing you can ever ask people to do is to commit five minutes of their time to your film. The first step is to get them to even open the link. Once they do...
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    archived-videos JOHN WILHELM- funny action short

    It always bothers me when people label their own films as "hilarious." I found the use of the wilhelm scream humorous, and I even chuckled at the guy screaming at the end. However, I would not call this "hilarious" at all. Obviously, comedy is subjective...but I feel like this could have been...
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    archived-videos Trailer/Website for my short film

    Hah, I've nearly done things like that myself. It's all part of the learning process and becoming better at what we do :)
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    archived-videos Playing It Safe - Short Film

    I think the moral of the story was more about how to move on and live with that kind of trauma in your past. That's just what I got out of it though, I could be completely wrong :)
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    archived-videos Trailer/Website for my short film

    All I was saying about needing the skills to back it up is that Red is known for being a professional digital cinema camera used on profession film. So, if you're going to make that as a selling point of your film then hopefully the film is professional. I can't paint worth a darn, it'd be like...
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    archived-videos Trailer/Website for my short film

    I'm not "knifing him" and moreover his camera choice has no affect on my overall review of his website and film making. I DO feel like if you're going to list yourself as a Red shooter you should have the skills to back it up. However, that is neither here nor there right now because rather or...
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    archived-videos Trailer/Website for my short film

    Well what is there to say? Your website needs a TON of work. It looks like something I would have made when I was ten years old using freewebs. It even says "Untitled Document" in the browser! That will turn off a lot of people right there. That being said...I decided to continue on for some...
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    archived-videos Cheerios and Rainbows

    I'm sorry you didn't get it. Thank you for taking the time to watch it and post a response :)
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    archived-videos Playing It Safe - Short Film

    I commented on this over on YouTube, I actually liked it quite a lot, but after thinking about it for a while I've thought of some things. The one thing that caught my attention with this is that it felt a little bit lacking. I agree with what Kinglis said, that you were perhaps playing it a bit...
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    archived-videos Cheerios and Rainbows

    Thank you for the comment :) The "story," as it were, is really more of a social satire on maturity (or lack there-of) and silly high schoolers. It's purposefully all over the place as perhaps a bit of an exaggeration on the average high schooler. I guess that is to say, it's not supposed to...
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    archived-videos Cheerios and Rainbows

    Hey all, I just released another short and I was hoping I could some feedback on it :) Let me know what ya'll think. Hate it? Love it? Indifferent? I love honest feedback. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rKJJ1B6NHrQ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rKJJ1B6NHrQ
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    archived-videos High School Life, Day II: Jenny

    Hey all, I've just released another short and was hoping I could some feedback! Thanks so much! "This film is a short excerpt from a day in the life of a typical high school student. This is Day II: Jenny." https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C0sipBWEON4 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C0sipBWEON4...
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    archived-videos High School Life, Part I: Stapled

    Haha, thanks much! I love it when a word like "slop" can be used in a good way! :)
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    archived-videos High School Life, Part I: Stapled

    I agree with you completely, Cracker. I am a big fan of docu-style filming and shaky cam, but not to the extent that it is in a lot of my films. I don't intend to be that shaky, it never seems as bad through the LCD on the camera as it does in the final product. It's something I'm working on...
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