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Oh, no of course not. There's far more that has to be done, but this is definitely a major hurdle I have to overcome. I've never done film before I started doing this. That promo you saw was the very first piece I had ever done. So yeah, all of this is foreign territory to me. Thanks so...

Still good advice. Thanks man!

Oye! I need an editor. Yeah, my grammar sucks. It's definitely something I need to work on. Thanks for helping out with this piece. And awesome! Looks like I'm improving. Still have a long way to go. Its funny because I used to always think that having a good idea was all that you...

Wow, I just want to say that you guys are providing some amazing feedback. I think the point I've been missing all along is the fact that I was dressing it up as a typical apocalyptic thriller like the "Book of Eli" or "28 Days Later". It's not like that at all. It's more of a mental...

Okay. I see what you're saying. It's too ambiguous with a lot of action words but not enough depth to give readers a good idea of what it's about. Oh boy...This is gonna be tough because the film is really...well, strange. I should have done a simple story...fml. Thanks for referring me...

Sooo...too markety and plastic? I tried being more artistic but the team I'm working with keeps telling me to make it sound like an ad. Thanks for the input though.

Perhaps I should clarify. This is for our pre-kickstarter marketing, which will be a four to six month period of active marketing. We have a different strategy for kickstarter that also includes this content. Thanks for the feedback though.

Hey everyone, Not entirely sure if this is where I should be posting this, but I was wondering if you guys could critique this copy I made to promote a mini-series my brother and I are working on. The idea is to create a launch site where they can view this promo...

Lol, there is no project or documentary. I was merely free-writing one night and thought it was an interesting question to explore. But you know, now that you mention it, it kind of sounds like i'd be a cool documentary assuming you could gain access to the lives of the childhood actors.

Oh gee, thanks for your constructive criticism. You could have just not commented. Bare in mind that although this is the Internet, there's a person behind those words.

Yeah, I pretty much agree with you there. I was just trying to raise a question but it seems everyone here is thinking waaaay too much into it. Im just trying to explore the reasons for why many childhood actors or kids who are born into fame and fortune succumb to insanity. The key word...

Exactly! I'm right there with you.

lol, I was being sarcastic. And by no means are you disrespecting me. I'm certainly not an activist, especially one that's in favor of people who really don't need a lot of help.

But, I don't think poor drug addicts are struggling to move upwards because to say that means that they're trying. I live among poor people because I am poor and most of us aren't struggling with drug addiction. Sure, some of are and they generally become homeless. And those people who...

Well, someone's gotta do it. I'm actually in the process of making a documentary to shed light on this pressing issue. If only we knew how much they struggled...

Right. I know. But, I was shedding light on why many childhood actors succumb to the same fate even though they're filthy rich. No one's saying it's predominantly rich people who suffer these problems. I'm just saying that this is one of many reasons why a lot of childhood actors go off the...

Ah, yeah good point. I didn't think about that. But, it's actually pretty interesting to find that there are less drug addicts working in retail than I previously thought. At least, in my experience. There were definitely drug users, though. I wonder what the ratio is between users and...

Maybe, but hasn't it always been the case that "Old Money" was crazier than "New Money"? Also, why was that funny just out of curiosity?

I work in one of the worst environments known in the Western World. It’s even worse than a boring office job. It’s a retail profession. Literally, I’m a modern day slave in this second gilded age, so every day is deeply painful. I mean, just imagine if all the widgets in our computers had...

The Root of All Evil: How Shame has the capacity to Kill or Save I’m a fictional story-teller, which means I have to understand as much as I can about the human mind. For eight years, I’ve been trying to perfect my craft by understanding what we mean and how we function and through this, I’ve...